Feedback after the pitch

 After pitching the idea, we have got some feedback:

 

During weekly FaceTime meeting we came up with different solutions...

The biggest problem from this feedback is how are we going to tell the audiences that the body is clone bot twin, we came up with :

- research articles or newspaper about clone on the table, so we can give a close up on this

- the label on the body, we can write something like version 3.0 clone on the label so audiences will know this is a clone.

- In the end the scientist walk out of dark and video himself on the camera, like a digital diary. He face the camera and say something like clone number... 

- the scientist transform the fingerprint on to the clone.

Now, we need to consider more detail of what do we want to film and how to fit in the titles.

As a group, we discussed that close up will only take a minute of the whole opening, so we thought about what we should add in the beginning, because we have close up montage later on so we want something physical or some actions straight in from the start.

Here are few things we thought about:

• the scientist drag a bag in, which the body is inside. The clone he is using  woke up and they start to       have a fight but their actions are the same.